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accepted How to improve logic/reduce plot holes?
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accepted How to make a character that doesn't speak about himself relatable?
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accepted Is the following deus-ex-machina? If so, should I remove it?
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accepted I have three dead-end chapters. Should I keep them or remove them?
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asked How to improve logic/reduce plot holes?
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comment How to make a character that doesn't speak about himself relatable?
Thanks! I'm doing my best to make it good.
Jun
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comment How to make a character that doesn't speak about himself relatable?
Oh, did that. Can you check my EDIT? The other characters do talk about him. But not too much. (By the way, thanks for the advice. I'll give it a thought.)
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revised How to make a character that doesn't speak about himself relatable?
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revised How to make a character that doesn't speak about himself relatable?
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asked How to make a character that doesn't speak about himself relatable?
Jun
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accepted Feedback: What to use and what to ignore?
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comment Is the following deus-ex-machina? If so, should I remove it?
Why it's not deus-ex-machina if it happens on the first 20-22% and not if it happens after?
Jun
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comment Is the following deus-ex-machina? If so, should I remove it?
Oh, I see. I thought no one in this site would read it.
Jun
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comment Is the following deus-ex-machina? If so, should I remove it?
Thanks, but wait a minute, how do you know so much about the story? Ha.
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comment Is the following deus-ex-machina? If so, should I remove it?
Okay, thanks Dale and Lauren for the info.
Jun
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comment Feedback: What to use and what to ignore?
@Dale Hartley Emery I didn't do it. This is the message I see: "This question has an open bounty worth +50 reputation from Mnementh ending in 7 days." That means Mnementh opened the bounty? I don't even know what a bounty is, ha.
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comment Is the following deus-ex-machina? If so, should I remove it?
@Ville Niemi You mean something like my EDIT? Or maybe that's not enough?
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revised Is the following deus-ex-machina? If so, should I remove it?
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comment Is the following deus-ex-machina? If so, should I remove it?
Well, the opposite happens. She is laughed at at the animal behavior class for asking about animal suicide. That's how a member of the club (who is in the class) finds her. Do you think that works? Or it's still deux-ex-machina?