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| location | Newfoundland and Labrador, Canada | |
| age | 29 | |
| visits | member for | 2 years, 5 months |
| seen | Apr 9 '11 at 12:03 | |
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Dec 21 |
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How can multiple viewpoints be used without breaking the flow of the story? @John, I haven't dismissed the idea. I like the impact of the multiple viewpoints, but I'll play around on a re-write to see if third-person works all the way through. |
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Dec 19 |
awarded | Student |
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Dec 19 |
awarded | Scholar |
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Dec 19 |
accepted | How can multiple viewpoints be used without breaking the flow of the story? |
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Dec 19 |
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How can multiple viewpoints be used without breaking the flow of the story? Good point about tension. I'll have to take another look at Ender's Game (it's been years since I read it) to refresh my memory on that part of the book. |
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Dec 19 |
asked | How can multiple viewpoints be used without breaking the flow of the story? |
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Nov 27 |
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Using slang as a narrator - pros and cons +1 for great examples with clear reasoning, @djacobson. These paragraphs contrast nicely. |
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Nov 27 |
awarded | Supporter |