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comment How can multiple viewpoints be used without breaking the flow of the story?
@John, I haven't dismissed the idea. I like the impact of the multiple viewpoints, but I'll play around on a re-write to see if third-person works all the way through.
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accepted How can multiple viewpoints be used without breaking the flow of the story?
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comment How can multiple viewpoints be used without breaking the flow of the story?
Good point about tension. I'll have to take another look at Ender's Game (it's been years since I read it) to refresh my memory on that part of the book.
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asked How can multiple viewpoints be used without breaking the flow of the story?
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comment Using slang as a narrator - pros and cons
+1 for great examples with clear reasoning, @djacobson. These paragraphs contrast nicely.
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