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Mar 14 |
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How to improve this introductory paragraph (to fit writting standards and grab the reader's attention)? retagged "critique" |
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Mar 14 |
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First conversation scenes I've written (looking for errors, conventions, and improvements according to writting standards). This is great!! |
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Mar 14 |
suggested | suggested edit on How to improve this introductory paragraph (to fit writting standards and grab the reader's attention)? |
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Mar 14 |
answered | How to improve this introductory paragraph (to fit writting standards and grab the reader's attention)? |
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Mar 14 |
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Please help me improve this sentence… I'm not entirely sure what that means, could you have a look at my question on EL&U? english.stackexchange.com/questions/16283/… |
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Mar 13 |
awarded | Citizen Patrol |
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Mar 13 |
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Please help me improve this sentence… Thanks, great tips, especially re decade. I'm using would as the past tense of will, not as a conditional -- is that the cause of the grammatical problem? |
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Mar 13 |
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Please help me improve this sentence… Thanks! These examples make the sentence longer, though; I'm looking for something short and sharp, with an informal tone (i.e. something the speaker might have said in a conversation) |
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Mar 13 |
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Please help me improve this sentence… Thanks, I like the "was about to" construction. I was thinking that "I'd" ("I would") made it shorter and sharper, but is it wrong/awkward in this context? |
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Mar 13 |
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Please help me improve this sentence… Yes, I like it, nothing wrong with metaphors! |
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Mar 13 |
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Please help me improve this sentence… Thanks, I like it -- but the catch is, it needs to be in past tense as the speaker makes this statement at a point in the past |
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Mar 13 |
awarded | Student |
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Mar 12 |
awarded | Teacher |
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Mar 12 |
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How to make easy and fast money selling a short book (which is available for download)? added 10 characters in body |
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Mar 12 |
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How to make easy and fast money selling a short book (which is available for download)? added 517 characters in body |
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Mar 12 |
awarded | Editor |
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Mar 12 |
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How to make easy and fast money selling a short book (which is available for download)? added 189 characters in body |
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Mar 12 |
answered | How to make easy and fast money selling a short book (which is available for download)? |
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Mar 12 |
asked | Please help me improve this sentence… |
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