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| bio | website | michalmoroz.com |
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| visits | member for | 2 years, 4 months |
| seen | Oct 26 '12 at 7:37 | |
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Mar 4 |
answered | Dialog, just what's the best way to write it? |
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Feb 22 |
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What revisions for this draft would be more readable and/or more humorous? This leaves me with another question - is it just me who didn't catch the point despite having all required information on a plate, or maybe this joke is not going to work in some specific cases? I think that the main reason in my case is that the joke is totally correct from the logic point of view. |
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Feb 22 |
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What revisions for this draft would be more readable and/or more humorous? Thanks for your comment, I just followed the description the wrong way and got the feeling that using two names for one substance is acceptable and only to avoid repetition, especially given the fact that injecting two large doses of adrenaline gives the same effect as a combination of two different chemicals. |
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Feb 22 |
answered | What revisions for this draft would be more readable and/or more humorous? |
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Feb 15 |
awarded | Teacher |
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Feb 15 |
answered | Very Dark Fantasy |
