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Mar
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answered Dialog, just what's the best way to write it?
Feb
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comment What revisions for this draft would be more readable and/or more humorous?
This leaves me with another question - is it just me who didn't catch the point despite having all required information on a plate, or maybe this joke is not going to work in some specific cases? I think that the main reason in my case is that the joke is totally correct from the logic point of view.
Feb
22
comment What revisions for this draft would be more readable and/or more humorous?
Thanks for your comment, I just followed the description the wrong way and got the feeling that using two names for one substance is acceptable and only to avoid repetition, especially given the fact that injecting two large doses of adrenaline gives the same effect as a combination of two different chemicals.
Feb
22
answered What revisions for this draft would be more readable and/or more humorous?
Feb
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Feb
15
answered How do evil protagonists win the reader over in dark fantasy stories?