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You could certainly try, but it sounds like the main story would come out gibberish to me. The only example of this which springs to mind is the Sherlock Holmes story "The Adventure of the Gloria Scott." A character receives a letter which reads: "The supply of game for London is going steadily up. Head-keeper Hudson, we believe, has been now told to ...


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Dark times are coming. Our world is on fire. Our is subjective and may work better. "Whole" is probably unnecessary. No one can stop them. Even so, we fight back. And despite our efforts, This doesn't repeat the word "fighting". All hope seems lost. But we don't give up. We fight... and we will ...


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I've found a happy medium in referencing the name of the character, or in this case "the man", about every 3-4 uses of the pronoun, which ends up being about once a paragraph. However, your writing tends to unexpectedly switch between third and first person and I don't quite feel like I'm understanding parts of your writing so I apologise if I get some ...


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The pronouns do not feel repetitive to me at all. Whichever novel you read, it will have an endless row of hes or shes or Is throughout the text. It is the common and therefore neutral way, and does not stand out or annoy. Only "the man" may get repetitive, because we are used to reading a person's name, usually once per paragraph. But if you keep "the man" ...


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No it is not necessary to insure your work before sending it. International law will garantee copyright ownership to the author without any formality. This is stated in the Berne convention in article 5.2, and repeated in the main international treaties on copyright. However, it is necessary to be able to prove that you are the author in casesomeone else ...


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Let the editor decide. Send your story. Editors can't buy a story you don't send. They know more than you do about what they want. And you are almost certainly not a great judge of your own stories. They may like a story that you think is not your best. Many writers and editors are horrified by this advice. They are concerned, I think, that writers will ...



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