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IMHO, you have good material but too many details that don't help your story. The first two sentences in the first pargraph about darkness are an example. I would omit them and begin: "There were two people sitting there in the darkness... The reason is that the "type" of darkness that you described is not essential to the story. In the dialog, they take ...



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