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For a screenplay it is standard to use present tense, and to use simple present in most cases. It makes the action more immediate. So, instead of "are watching" you'd just say that they "watch". Or they gawk, or scan or consider or stare at -- whatever makes sense. Use very specific nouns and verbs. Every word counts. You don't have many to work with. So, ...
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