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Maybe show don't tell? Adam waited on the path for Bob to return from the woods. When he reappeared, Bob was still zipping his fly. Adam said, "Sorry to follow you, but I wanted to talk." ...


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Huh. Weird question. There's the good ol' "relieved himself" or "urinated". Or you could be a bit vague and just have him coming back around the bush, doing up his fly. There's a fairly limited list of activities he could have been involved in that would have necessitated an undone fly. The time frame should rule most of the non-urination ones out? ...


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As the other answers here show, to each their own. Some people enjoy combat scenes, and some don't. But also, different people (in both categories) enjoy different kinds of combat scenes, and there are many different ways to handle them, depending on purpose as well as audience. For readers who aren't really into combat, the best combat scenes will be ...



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