I am having a miserable time with POV. My story is from one person's point of view. I keep slipping into other POV. When I interviewed people, and wrote articles for mags and newspapers, I never had this problem. I don't see the shift when I write or when I proof read it. My critique group catches them. I'm a better writer than this. I have sections where I'm not sure if it is a shift.
closed as not a real question by Neil Fein♦ Mar 1 '12 at 18:52
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