I've been meaning to improve upon my characterization within my writings. As well as the mentioned, I also aim to build better structure and keep to it.
Tonight I'll come to see a presence of thee Eyes in tears with a life that fears Salute my dear don't cry no tear for there is light in this sorrow sight For later fate until you'll vacate come to me I'm meant to be
I chose this freestyle technique, since I see it better fit in this "romance" setting. I feel as if I accomplished my set goals, but I'd like some critique on the writing.