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Thanks for signing up for the Tip for Tip beta.
We’re really excited about the launch and we wanted to let you know hat you’ll be the first to get in when we pull back the covers.
I also wanted to mention that we're stoked you’re on board already and to show our appreciation we want to let you know you’ll all be VIP members. While we don’t exactly know the scope of what that entails yet, we do know that when we want to distribute a special feature, pricing, or other Tip for Tip community advantage y’all will be the ones who get the special treatment.
We’re going to make everyone who has signed up in the system a VIP member when the time the countdown timer ends at http://www.tipfortip.com , so be sure to spread the word so others get this one-time opportunity to be the first group and VIP in the next big thing.
Cheers, Kirk and the Tip for Tip team