I don't know how to reword this:
Along the way, we see how the faults Jacob made earlier in life are repeated back on him.
I know
repeated back on him
doesn't sound correct, but I don't know what to replace it with.
Any ideas?
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I don't know how to reword this:
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doesn't sound correct, but I don't know what to replace it with. Any ideas? |
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first of all, it's "the mistakes" he made — one doesn't make faults
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we see how the faults Jacob made earlier in his life begin to bleed back into his existence, recurring endlessly like an abyss in trepidation, an inflatable nightmare; draining through fading, whispered telephone conversations in the winter drear. |
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