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After a haze of alcohol at the bar, we hurried to the nearest hotel, without any words exchanged, only steamy sensual fancies filling our heads. ....In the hotel room, I unzipped his trousers, his penis popping out. It had already attained its virile phallus. I, too, undressed myself, slowly, tantalizingly, revealing my peachy skin. His penis head already wore a sheen of erotic secretion. I flung his manly body onto the king-size bed, pouncing on his Samson chest, my mossy vagina and his hard steely stick in a mutual frolic...I slid my body downward, until my mouth came to his cock, over which I drooled with abandon.
How can I make it more sensual, dramatic but at the same time very literary?